When I started rain storming ideas for paper number three. I remember I had too many information that I was struggling to make a thesis statement and organize all the options first on my mind. Then with the help of all tools provided by Ms Lee, I was able to start writing.
Immigration theme has being a part of me for over twenty years. Since I have memory I have been observing the process, and listening to stories every day about the challenges in immigration. I attended one of the office sessions with Ms Lee, and she was able to give me some ideas and give me feedback about my paper.
Now that I have my final grade, I know for sure I have to improve a lot. Still, I have to learn. It has not being easy for me to write the same way I do in my first language, Spanish. I hope one day, I can write my own experiences and help other people who struggle in difficult situations. Finally, I know for sure I have to work more on my thesis statement.
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